Unforgetable Picnic (Fictional comic)

One fine day, Doralin and her friends decided to go for a picnic at a waterfall, so they board a bus and go all the way to the place.

Doralin, her Sweet Dear Plum and her Honey Banana on the bus.

Once reached the destination, everyone was so excited. They hurriedly jump down from the bus and ran as fast as they could to the................................................................... toilet.

After that, everyone proceed on foot and walk all the way complaining, sighing and groaning to the waterfall. Once there, everyone was speechless, captivated by the beautiful natural surrounding created by "The Almighty".....

Plum and Orange cannot wait any longer, they pull Doralin to the waterfall and asked Chrispy to take pictures.

Out of a sudden... Doralin remembered that she forgot to buy her "Deepavali" bus ticket to go home. She look happy outside (cause want to take photo ma so must smile la) but she was cursing.... I mean crying her heart out inside... "Jean and Julie will be going back to Penang without me!!!! Oh! Why? Why? Tell me why that I am so..... forgetful?"

She was so broken hearted till, she think of killing herself.... but how? She look around, she saw Chrispy, Banana and Plum were happily splashing each other with the cool water and Orange was scolding them for behaving so childishly.

Then she look at the magnificent, majestic waterfall. She though of going up there and jump down but she thought to herself. "Hmm.... nope, too high, too far, I am too tired to climb, too dangerous I might slipped and fall like Humty Dumpty."

She thought of drowning herself in the water but unfortunately........

... the water is just deep enough for them to wash their feet and legs la.

She think and think and keep on thinking of how to kill herself painlessly and easily. At last she remembered that she had borrowed a penknife from Chrispy the other day and the penknife is still in her pocket.

Before she decided to do the stupid thing, she try to say good bye to her Sweet Dear Plum as her Sweet heart Chrispy, Honey Banana and Buddy Orange were busy playing hide and seek behind the rocks and trees.

Some where up the waterfall, there was a tough but cute and cuddly looking lady doing 'Tai Qi" or "Qi Kong" no wait a minute...it looks like Yoga...... or aerobic? Ok, let's take a look.....

Oooohh..... who is that? Is that Power Puff Girl? No! Is that Power Ranger? No!

It's..... It's......

It's THUNDERLOO our all time legendary Super Duper Heroin!!!!!! And she is charging her super power...... (She forgot to charge yesterday so power very low already.....)

Oh! Look! She is done and she is singing her Theme song!!!! "Here I come to save the day!!!!!' Yo! Yo! Yo! Check it out! Check it out! Yo! Yo!" I love her theme song......

Suddenly she saw Doralin with her superpower eyes and heard what Doralin had said with her super power ears. She realise something was not right!!!!!

She run as fast as the lightning down the slippery and sloppy rocks... She can fly but.... she forgot to bring along her super suit!!!!

Doralin was about to cut her little finger with the penknife when suddenly.......

Doralin ignored ThunderLoo, so ThunderLoo has no choice but to pounced at Doralin and try to take the penknife away from her...

They argued, pulled and pushed, and tarik dan tolak.........

Finally, Chrispy's penknife broke into half lo.... and both of them started to blame each other....

Then Banana come out from nowhere and grabbed ThunderLoo's hand and declared that ThunderLoo is the winner... (Actually Banana just want to take photo and autograph from The Super Duper Heroin....")

When the others saw that ThunderLoo was there with Banana, everyone came running and pushing each other just to shake ThunderLoo's hand and take pictures with her....

You see what I mean... This Plum can hug ThunderLoo some more.....

Even Orange was very eager to take pictures with the Super Duper Heroin

Then the whole gang except Doralin (Doralin was forced to be the camera girl ok) wants to take pictures and hug our Super Duper Heroin.

Ok.... now Doralin's turn to take photo with the Super Duper Heroin and thank her for breaking Chrispy's penknife..... Err... No, I mean saving her life..... actually saving her little finger la.....

After the photo session with the Super Duper Heroin, everyone grabbed hold of Doralin and......

put her back in the KKB Detention Camp....... and guarded by Plum.

At the end, they all live happily ever after except ...... for poor Doralin who is home sick in the detention camp......

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